原创《临江仙。二首》（晏几道体、和凝体）

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原创《临江仙。晏几道体》

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书院江南逢翰墨，初吟蝶恋赋宫商。追寻一曲临江仙。唤来听雅韵，歌舞更无前。

独善其身亲好月，拼词捻句呈娟。祝福祈祷更惜缘。修来前世梦，醒后更缠绵。

又一体双调六十二字，前后段各五句、三平韵晏几道

　　
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原创《临江仙。和凝体》

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雁行千里栖江岸，带去鱼信笺书。管弦琵琶罄欢娱，采茶姑娘望清浦。

踱步慢吟唐宋句，墨调着色冰肤。花迷三月荡舳舮，轻舟歌舞阅西湖。

临江仙双调五十四字，前后段各四句、三平韵和凝

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